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Critique by Vic-P-Photography Jun 15, 2012, 12:41:16 PM
There is no faulting the imagery, atmosphere or style within this shot. The early morning light is perfect and has been graced with a low drift of mist that gives a great feel to the shot but also an extra level of interest for the eye. What would normally be a spikey some what messy foreground is turned wonderfully in the photos favour with well used aperture blur and a subtle vignette that gives a gloomy feel and great contrast to the more brightly exposed mist, it adds something sinister to a shot mostly filled with whimsy. Aperture blur is something we kind of take for granted but it should be commended when it adds something to the shot.

While the pose is simple from the model it suits the serene nature of the shot and the flash of movement as well as letting a little show in the exposure is again a well judged treat for the eye adding detail as well as ambience. Again in styling she is simple but the background does not call for anything lavish complimented further by her natural beauty rather than someone more pin up styled.

The shots few weaknesses are for me in composition, her placing in the shot odd I feel, not quite at thirds though thankfully not quite centre either. It is hard to tell at first, things feel right but as I took in the photo I realised it was something of a trick of the eye, her direction carrying me away from the left of the shot almost forgetting it was there so it felt as if she was a third of the way in from the left instead. As I take in the rest of the image the placing seems slightly more odd. I think placing her a third in from the left genuinely and sliding the shot around to put the tree in the right would be more favourable. However I understand that I do not know what is a little further left and whether it would obstruct the image.

Those problems however do not take away from a stunning capture of light and a well executed portrait that falls under the indie banner, square it off and it would make for a great cd cover. Lovely work.
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thedaydreaminggirl Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014   Photographer
You are featured, please leave some feedback if you like, they all deserve it. :heart:
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elzbietakocieda Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
niesamowity klimat...
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
:)
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AivilCeJota Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Hello, there!
I really liked this photo :1
May I please repost it on my tumblr ( aivilcejota.tumblr.com )?
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Yes, if it would refer to this picture on deviantart ;)
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AivilCeJota Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Of course :)
Thank you!
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KerenGoldian Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
Beautiful work, the hair movement is so well captured.
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you!
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lomatic Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Very cool shot.
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks : )
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SylviaBoyle Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Unbelievable.. the model looks exactly like my daughter! Very stunning picture :heart:
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
haha thank you!:)
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Kage-Nya Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
Kocham tą atmosferę jesieni :)
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:iconlukreszja:
Lukreszja Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
och ja też :heart:
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Bajipanda Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
Do you have this picture in a higher resolution? It's stunning
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bellalleb-photo Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
featured you in my latest journal: [link]
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks!
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justiv Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful photo : )
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks <3
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LunaFeles Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013   Photographer
wow....
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:aww:
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PoetryEmbrace Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
Beautiful, great shot.
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you!
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PoetryEmbrace Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
You're welcome.
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nicolasjolly Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Beautiful work!
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:aww:
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MariaHerbst Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
Потрясающе!!!
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myloveforfart Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
BEAUTIFUL!
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weruninhalflight Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
oh shiz you are too good.
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silverwing-sparrow Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012   Photographer
Hi! It was featured here [link]
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
^_^
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deer-o Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Photographer
magiczne i hipnotyzujące ;)
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:aww:
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adenozynodifosforan Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Photographer
wspaniałe
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:bow:
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aurille Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012   Photographer
Lukier, kocham Cię za to zdjęcie.
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
ciesze się :heart:
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KatMPhotography Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Professional Photographer
wow!!!!! this is beautifully atmospheric.
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:aww:
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Hiya. Featured this here [link] :)
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks!:heart:
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tellmewhoiam Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Pleasure's mine :)
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tellmewhoiam Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
So much love for this! <3
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leelloor Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012   Photographer
Featured in my journal : [link] :heart:
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Lukreszja Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:heart:
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ChemicalBerry Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Student Photographer
I love this photo. It's perfect
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malakarola Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
cudowne zdjęcie! moim zdaniem subtelne, a jednocześnie pełne emocji
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bohemian001 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
:D Wow, very beautiful!!
I shared this on my blog; [link]
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hlaurah Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
Beautiful.
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MRKDZN-FOTOS Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Student Photographer
Wow! I love this image! I love the mood and atmosphere of it all.
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