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What the sun told me II

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I think this is beautiful. I think it has a really great essence to it that you don't see just anywhere. Composition is great. It is usually difficult to get a great shot that involves the sun being in it. There is a great balance of warm and cool tones. The theme is cliche but in the 'Timeless story that will never die' sort of way.

Some things I think that would make this even more striking would be to focus on getting a sharper image. Also, don't use a flashy font for a copyright and don't put it in the middle of the image. I think its a huge distraction when there are words watermarked in the middle of an image.

Overall,great work!